With Such Words
if you aren't a hypocrite, your moral standards aren't high enough
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12th-Oct-2013 06:18 pm (UTC)
talibusorabat: ...What was the plot again? (NaNo: Plot?)
It's not even just that she's not thinking about them much; she's not even really being given options. It'd be interesting (and in-character) to have her given multiple options and she just impulsively picks one without considering the consequences. As it is, she's handed one idea and runs with it. It makes the entire story very flat.
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